I updated my Chapter 1 based on some of the comments I received today. Here it is.
I have not incorporated all those comments because I really want to make progress on my ethics today! It is still ready to be read, seeing as you both only had a chance to skim it before.
I did not get to:
- Fixing the problem's paragraph in 1.1 to make it more positive and reflective of other opportunities.
- Creating multiple research questions to choose from.
- Added some related work, but there is still more to put in place.
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